HomerDough's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The OmgZorz 1]

Cool

The graphics were very chalkish which is cool. The style was great. Don't see to many of these flashes. The sound wasn't all there. Not so much sounds. Tere was some violence but not a lot. The beginning menu was cool. Also, it was a lil funny.

Add some backgrounds, more sounds, voice acting, more violence (make someone get hurt, die etc.), and add some more humor.

Please respond

4/5
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Twist-Chao06 responds:

kk Thanks. me, Yingyong, and Dimond Boy are doing Voice acting for NO:4.
Glad You enjoyed it!

[A Newgrounds X-mas Story]

Alright

The graphics were pretty good but they can be impoved a bit. The style is good since it is weird (in a good way) The sound was cool but you couldv'e added more sound effects. There wasn't much violence and not so much humor.

Overall, to improve, just add a storyline, make the graphics a wee better. Also, when text are popping up, it seemed to fade too quickly. Let people click a button when they're done instead of rushing. Also, add some more humnor and violence

2/5
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Dash-02 responds:

Thanks I would use all your suggestions on my next flash =D

[SM-Bring it all Back]

Cool

The graphics were good and the animation was too. The loops were cool too. The style of this is good because it's original. It's a sun mafia. The sound was really funny. It was all happy jolly. There was no violence. You couldv'e finished the movie with a rocket hitting them at the end. The humor was there too. The preloader button made me laugh.

Overall, to improve, finish the movie on a different note; It just stopped abruptly. Also, add some violence.

3/5
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RampageSun responds:

Thanks Homer Dough Im pleased you liked it yeah were all about being heppy go lucky and have fun frollik in the flowers and fly into space and just have a good time and dont worrie the next one will be full version and wont stop abruptly.
Thank you for the possotive feedback and we will finnish the next one promise.
~RampageSun~

[Textual Adventures II]

That was crap

the graphics was crap. Make some good blood first of all. Make some good backgrounds too. For sound, it was very plain. When the text were talking, you should've made some good voices for the words instead of just letting people read it. The violence was only the little blood. Althouhg the animation was crap, it was funny nonetheless.

Overall, make some good blood when Brian kills him, make cool backgrounds, add some voice acting, and make it more funnier.

2/5
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Frenzy responds:

Ok...
...

...thanks......

[A Bahamut's Xmas Tale]

Meh

The graphics were alright but the animation was crap. All tweening. the voice acting was pretty good though. The only violence was the explicit text. Even though the animation was crap, it was funny as hell.

Overall, to improve, just make some FBF or some good tweening instead of normal basic tweening.

3/5
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kinggila responds:

I have done a bit of FBF, but it gets boring to me and most of the time, I may as well use tweening.

[The Newgrounds Tutorial]

Weird

I've never seen a tutorial shown like a movie. Shouldv'e made it Interactive. look at my NG tutorial and you can get an idea on how to make a flash like that.

First of all, make the quality of the pictures better. Then, make it interacive instead of a movie. Then, add some humor.

Most of all, just don''t make it a movie. It's just weird.

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2/5

Sidorio responds:

I can't do games yet.

[Cannabis' agnry rage]

I didn't understand

<Good Points>
The graphics were great and the sound matched the movie a little.

<Improvement>
I didn't understand a thing that was happening. It was too slow. The voice acting wasn't really good either.

<Comments>
Are you still doing RESPONSES? Please

2/5 homer8722
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Sir-CannabisClock responds:

I see.

I'm glad you liked the graphics, though I honestly could of done a bit better.

Its an "all your base" spoof/sim date spoof. You seem to not know of ayb, hence your confusion. Audio is directly from all your base.

yes sir, I check on a daily/weekly basis.

[Rotting Brains]

Sorry. Not good

<Good Points>
Music and sound were good. Some violence and you had a cool menu.

<Improvement>
Graphics were all tweened which looked absolutely horrible (no offence) Learn some FBF and it'll much better. The blood was horrible too. You should have added some humor too.

<Comments>
So -Frenzy-, you hit 1000+ reviews. Now where's my response? =-)

2/5 homer8722
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Frenzy responds:

Lol, I know. I've madebetter flash. I
m not the best animator. :(

And eys, I did hit 1,000+ reviews. Thanks for commenting on that, and here's your response! :)

Thanks for the review!

.frenZy.

[B and W Sun Parody]

That was cool

<Good Points>
The concept was cool. The black text and the white text made me chuckle. The sound, as always, matches it perfectly. And normal bringing the sun around.

<Improvement>
The graphics for the flowers weren't really good and you couldv'e made some easter eggs.

<Comments>
So Sunshine is finally coming to an end. This was a good way to end it with. ^.^

3/5 homer8722
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Seamonky responds:

Thanks for the good review Homer and here is your Response. :)

[The Nothing Flash]

Nice lol

<Good Points>
Graphics were okay, the voice acting was good, and it was rally funny.

<Improvement>
the graphics can be better and you can put some more violence.

<Comments>
I liked the preloader.

4/5 homer8722
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FrozenSheep responds:

awww wasen,t the psyco pointing the gun at the fatchick enough for you you sick bastard..jk