HomerDough's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FbF Attack]

Not bad

Good
The animation was great and the graphics. The sound was good too. Matched the atmosphere.

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Add a story. It WILL make it much better. Also it was a bit short

3/5 Review Request Club

Soupcat responds:

Well, glad to hear that about the audio. I'm always a bit worried that the music won't fit, or won't be in sync...etc.
Bt it always turns out good, glad it did this time as well.

Then, a story, I'd be happy if you'd send me a script and voiced it.
And I'd be happy to spend 3 months on a 5 minute animation, but only if I have neough booze.
Sponsering? Anybody?

But, thanks ffor the review! I love taht little club of yours, and I will participate happly.

[FF: Battle for Newgrounds]

Not bad

Good
The theme of Final Fantasy, (I think) and the humor.

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Add some sound and the theme music for those kind of battles. Instead of bubbles, maybe voice acting and some background music. The backgrounds were very plain and boring so add some new background instead of Newgrounds.

Homerdough
2/5 Review Request Club

Paradox responds:

Thanks, man. I was going to do voice acting at one point, but the whole idea seemed kind of hard, and I wasn't sure if it would have been worth it. And yeah, I should have used some better backgrounds, I know. But, I suppose, in the future, new people who never got to see Newgrounds before the redesign can be like "omfg, Newgrounds used to look really boring.

Thanks a lot! :)

[Further on Up the Road]

ARrrr?

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Shorten it or at least make it more excting. It was boring. Also add a sdifferent song. That was pretty whack (in my opinion at least) Ad some humor. It wasn't funny.

3/5
Review Request Club

IZSBHR responds:

If we shorten it, it doesn't fit the song.

The song was chosen for the collab.

It wasn't supposed to be funny.

[Korean Love Story]

Cool

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He should've got laid at the end but still good job. You could've added some humor like in "There She Is" but still good job

4/5
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Kenzu responds:

Well then only 18 year olds could watch it, but I want this flash to be seen by everyone!

"There she is" is a very good flash!
I have used some of their style to make my own.

[F*** OFF YOU F*****!]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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The storyline is pretty stupid but its funny. SO nothing reallt

That was so funny again. Why the Fu** are thee words censored. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

5/5
Review Request Club

kinggila responds:

I love this review. It's f****** great! :D

[Valentine's Day?!]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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NOOOOOO!!! Afro Star. You hurt his feelings. Whats your problem. Next episode, apoligize. (Also add Afro Stud throwing a chair through the window and killing you. Thats what you GET!

P.S. I don't know why I was laughing so hard. It wasn't that funny. I was just laughing because I was hyper or something

4/5
Review Request Club

kinggila responds:

Afro_Stud got revenge on "F*** OFF YOU F*****!".

"P.S. I don't know why I was laughing so hard. It wasn't that funny. I was just laughing because I was hyper or something"

Then calm down. XD BTW, I know I should calm down a lot at times, haha.

[Graham's Weird Day (1/3)]

FUNNY

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Even though it sounded like you used speakonia (maybe you did, maybe you didn't, I cant tell) ti sounded good. Make the animation better like good tweening. Also, can I say an idea for next week? How about you training to be a karate master. You're a beginnewr and you try to puch and kick that spinning thing with the wooden poles hanging out. Instead you get hit by them instead. Good job thouhg

4/5
Review Request Club

kinggila responds:

"Even though it sounded like you used speakonia"

Narrator - Speakonia
Graham - Me

"Also, can I say an idea for next week?..."

lol, ok. O__O

[Minefield I]

WTF?

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The graphics suck ass. Draw some good guns and blood. Make some good animation instead of crappy tweening (at least make it look good) Add some eerie music to set a mood. The first minefield continued is very weird. The storyline is all mixed up to me. Say what that green thing is, I thought it was a grenade but it was not. Also add a lil more humor (the stickmen spinning around on the TV was funny)

2/5
Review Request Club

Frenzy responds:

Thanks

~ Z

[Minefield]

Arrf?

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The stickmen were very badly drawn, there was no background, and the gun looked like creap. Make a beter gun, a better background, and add some blood. No blood? I thought you said this was graphic. It was way too short, only like a minute long (without the intro) Not really any storyline so add one and add some humor somehow.

2/5
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Frenzy responds:

thankssssssssssthanksssssssss sthankssssssssssthankssssssss ssthankssssssssssthanksssssss sssthankssssssssssthankssssss ssssthankssssssssss

[Luis is an Animator...]

Hmmm?

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There really any animation except some little movie clips. Also the white background doesn't add anything. Make some other cool, not blank, background. The music wasn't all that good so get some other music. No violence so show yourself or someone killiing Luis (if thats what u want) or something. Add some humor in some way

You can do better

2/5
Review Request Club

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Hmmm... I guess I could've changed the colour or put in some blots of colour...

The music was composed and performed in honour of Luis. That's half the point of the animation - the music I made for him.

I really wouldn't want to kill Luis. Just embarrass him.

Yeah, I guess it's not for everyone.

If I ever finish a Gogan&Bakura episode, I'm sure you'll prefer that.

Stay funky.