Alright but confusing
Took me a while to figure out what was going on. The graphics were phenomenal. This is very original so style points. Sound matched the mood beautifully. No violence. A preloader at least. No humor.
To improve, say this a meditation flash. Say so in the flash or something. Also, you can also make some other stuff flow through the water instead if the same scene over and over. Also, add something else funny