HomerDough's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snarf's Dance Party]

You're gonna need a lot of hw

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It was just a loop. So next time make a flash with more than 10 frames.

It was pretty funny though

2/5
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[The Matrix Mayhem]

Great Job

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Add more violence like you shooting at a sentinel or something. Also the quality was a bit blurry sometimes when someone moved their hand.

Thats about it. That was freaking hilarious.

4/5
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[Luis is an Animator...]

Hmmm?

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There really any animation except some little movie clips. Also the white background doesn't add anything. Make some other cool, not blank, background. The music wasn't all that good so get some other music. No violence so show yourself or someone killiing Luis (if thats what u want) or something. Add some humor in some way

You can do better

2/5
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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Hmmm... I guess I could've changed the colour or put in some blots of colour...

The music was composed and performed in honour of Luis. That's half the point of the animation - the music I made for him.

I really wouldn't want to kill Luis. Just embarrass him.

Yeah, I guess it's not for everyone.

If I ever finish a Gogan&Bakura episode, I'm sure you'll prefer that.

Stay funky.

[Sherbert the Cat 3-1]

Me confused

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Elaborate on the plot. Make it much longer. Way shorter than your other Sherbert flashes. Also add some violence. hardly any violence.

Pretty bad considering your skill with flash. I didn't know what was going on.

3/5
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Jonimator responds:

As i said before this is short because i split the 3rd sherbert into 2 parts. And if it makes you happy there'll ve violence in the 2nd part. Sorry to disapoint you.
Thanks for the review.

[The Snowball Cartoon]

Cool

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Npt really a lot but there could be a sound when the snowball makes contac (like a splat or something)

Cool flash (nice preloader)

4/5
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Jimtopia responds:

Yeah, well I wanted to make sure the music could be heard, but thx for ur suggestion.

[Red Riding Hood]

unbelievable

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Nothing to improve. This ain't a flash that has to be funny.

The graphics were just stunning and dark atmosphere was just great. The voice acting from the book was just great and also the music. So much violence and what a story. This is one hell of a good flash.

5/5
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[Jimtopia Changes]

Cool

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the graphics sucked ass but you could've made it at least 3d-looking. Also the animation tweening was pretty bad. Some animation as good like the background but thats about it. Otherwise it was real funny

3/5
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Jimtopia responds:

Ah, well, thx for the 7. I'm glad you thought it was funny.

[Duck Luck Intro. (Old)]

Good intro

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The flash was a bit short for an intro. Make it longer for about 15 secs or something. It was just REAL short. Yeah, the screenshots were in very bad quality. I didn't even know what that was. Just sharpen those pics

The short animations for each character were pretty cool.

Overall, cool intro

3/5
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