HomerDough's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SM-Bring it all Back]

Cool

The graphics were good and the animation was too. The loops were cool too. The style of this is good because it's original. It's a sun mafia. The sound was really funny. It was all happy jolly. There was no violence. You couldv'e finished the movie with a rocket hitting them at the end. The humor was there too. The preloader button made me laugh.

Overall, to improve, finish the movie on a different note; It just stopped abruptly. Also, add some violence.

3/5
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RampageSun responds:

Thanks Homer Dough Im pleased you liked it yeah were all about being heppy go lucky and have fun frollik in the flowers and fly into space and just have a good time and dont worrie the next one will be full version and wont stop abruptly.
Thank you for the possotive feedback and we will finnish the next one promise.
~RampageSun~

[SM:SunMafiaIntro (Undone)]

okay flash

The sunmafia and the ng tank were drawn pretty good. But the backgrounds and the wiisun were pretty bad drawn. he style is alright because it's a different series. The sound was matched up good. There was violence with the wii but it was so fast, i barely saw anything. After that it was just a black screen.

Overall, work on the backgrounds, slow down the fight, have a story, take out the join us (put it in the end and beginning of flash instead), and most of all, finish it.

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2/5

[Something Fishy]

Alright

the graphics were good but the animation was like frame after frame. There was no combined frames. It looked like a picture after a picture after a picture. The style was very cartoonish which is good. The sound was funny and stupid at the same time. Only violence was bird dying. The song was funny and the cat with the fork looked funny too.

Overall, just don't make the movie look like a slideshow.

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3/5

[The Newgrounds Tutorial]

Weird

I've never seen a tutorial shown like a movie. Shouldv'e made it Interactive. look at my NG tutorial and you can get an idea on how to make a flash like that.

First of all, make the quality of the pictures better. Then, make it interacive instead of a movie. Then, add some humor.

Most of all, just don''t make it a movie. It's just weird.

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2/5

Sidorio responds:

I can't do games yet.

[Submit]

Beautiful Movie

The graphics look so real. They are amazing. The style was great. An swf. going through Under judgement. The sound was very matched up with the flash theme. There was not actually violence but it was serious though. There was no humor but again, it's a serious flash.

To improve, I don't know, add some violence like something shooting at it or something. Otherwise, Beautiful work.

5/5 Loved the ending

[There she is!!!]

Phenomenal

The graphics were simple but the animation was flawless. The style was one I've never seen before. The sound matched it pretty good. There was some violence like when she threw the people up in the air. Also, it was hilarious at some parts.

To improve, nothing really to improve. This flash is amazing

5/5