HomerDough's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[VT - East Park]

Alright

Good: The drawings were alright. Some voiceeovers were good. And style

Improvement: Have more than two people making voice-overs. Work on your hunmor. Not that funny. Also, you can put subtitles for when they are talking. That'd be cool.

Overall: It's good

3/5
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[Declaration of Revocation]

Very funny

Good: The humor and sound

Improvement: Make more animation instead of just text. You relied on jokes more than the animation. Also, you CAN, not must, put buttons so people don't have to rush reading the words.

Overall: Alright but very funny

2/5
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Sidorio responds:

Thanks.

[Hylight Dance Off]

Alright

The sprites were in pretty good quality and they were original too. The musics were cool. There was little violence. You had some buttons. Not much humor.

To improve, add more humor and violence. Also make it longer. Give the movie a different ending too

3/5
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spare-jello responds:

Humor and violence... sorry, but it's not my slice of the cake. Anyway, thanks for reviewing.

[Xombie: Chapter 4]

Getting better each time

The graphics are always amazing. I'm just "wow!". The sound was all great too. It matched very well. Violence was there too. Better menu too.

To improve, just put humor.

5/5
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[Xombie: Chapter 3]

Great once again

I really enjoy watching your series. The graphics were even better than the first one. The style and the sound were both great too. This one had more violence than the first one. When cerberus spit out the tiger's paw, it made me chuckle.

To improve, once again, add more humor.

5/5
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[Xombie: Chapter 2]

Unbelievable

The graphics were very good. One of the best. The style was all yours so good there. The sound effects, voice acting, and music were all amazing. There was definitely violence. Also, the mirror scene was funny. Less alive than they appear.

To improve, just make it more funnier and a bit more violence. That's it

5/5
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[The OmgZorz 3]

Great job

The graphics were more improved and the animation was even better. The style is always great. Finally, sound! Put voice acting though. Lots of violence in this one. No menu? Boo. Also, this one is hilarious.

To improve, add voice acting for god's sake. Make a menu and add even more violence and humor. You can never have too much

5/5
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Twist-Chao06 responds:

Thanks. Anywho, For No:4 they all get Sound Chips, or somnething, i dunno, and they start talking. Ive made that already, and due to come out TODAY!

[The OmgZorz 2]

C00l

The graphics were slightly improved. The style is very good because of originality. There was more violence and more humor. But hardly any sound. Also, the beginning menu was brought down a notch.

To improve, again add some voice acting, more sounds, and the graphics can always be improved. Also make it longer

4/5
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Twist-Chao06 responds:

No:4 will be all about the talking, i swear. youll love it.

[The OmgZorz 1]

Cool

The graphics were very chalkish which is cool. The style was great. Don't see to many of these flashes. The sound wasn't all there. Not so much sounds. Tere was some violence but not a lot. The beginning menu was cool. Also, it was a lil funny.

Add some backgrounds, more sounds, voice acting, more violence (make someone get hurt, die etc.), and add some more humor.

Please respond

4/5
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Twist-Chao06 responds:

kk Thanks. me, Yingyong, and Dimond Boy are doing Voice acting for NO:4.
Glad You enjoyed it!

[A Newgrounds X-mas Story]

Alright

The graphics were pretty good but they can be impoved a bit. The style is good since it is weird (in a good way) The sound was cool but you couldv'e added more sound effects. There wasn't much violence and not so much humor.

Overall, to improve, just add a storyline, make the graphics a wee better. Also, when text are popping up, it seemed to fade too quickly. Let people click a button when they're done instead of rushing. Also, add some more humnor and violence

2/5
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Dash-02 responds:

Thanks I would use all your suggestions on my next flash =D