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[Phoenix Wrong: Last Stand]

Holy Crap that was funny

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Nothing to improve. This is just too damn funny and good.

The sprites were great and it was just hilarious. The sound was amazing. The voice acting and clips from other places were just so good and funny. It was great

5/5
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[Clay Killer]

Lol

The animation of the clay was pretty good. The quality was good too. There was no sound though. You can add some suspenseful music or a scream when the guy gets cut. You can make more blood, there wasn't much because the guy was red. There was no replay button or menu. So add a menu and replay button. Also make the death look more funnier. You made it funny but not HILARIOUS!

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[A Kingly Melody]

Damn good

The graphics were damn good. The animation wasn't all that bad. The timing of the events were pretty damn good. The music was very uplifting and "happy". No violence but because its a "happy" film, you don't need any. You can add some humor though, I don't know put SBC tripping at some point. Get a chuckle out of the audience. it was a great movie altogether.

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MetalDart responds:

Ugh, you've reviewed all my flashes, it's like I have an e-stalker. D:

Also, I love how you critique my flashes on that stuff when all you make is tutorials. Not an insult, I'm just saying try giving us animators a break every once in a while. I know you gave this a positive review, but if I only responded to one of your reviews, I think you'd have a greater chance for reading it.

Thanks for the positive review man, it means a lot.

<3

[Happy Birthday Zekey!]

Sound UP

The graphics were alright and make the lip sync look better. There was hardly any animation so add some of that. The sound; szzzz that's where you went bad. It was way too low. I couldn't hear crap. Also, make like a robber come into the birthday party and Zekey kills him or something. Make some violence and some humor. For humor, you can make Zekey have a heart attack when he gets hit with the "SURPRISE!" That'll get a chuckle out of some people

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[Happy Birthday SOAS]

"What the bloody hell was that?"

The graphics and animation was really crap. you definitely need to improve on that. The music was okay but it wasn't great. You have to find more sounds like when the guy is whipping the other guy. You have violence but again, make the blood look much better. there was some humor that was funny like scene transition. But still add much more. Plz add these suggestions to your flash to improve it even further.

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[CC Flash Jam]

What

The graphics on the clocks besides StrawberryClock, were good. There wasn't really any animation though. You can add some animation of some sort. The music was really random but it was good. it matched a bit with the flash. You can add some violence and i know you tried to make this funny but it wasn't. Make it funnier because I didn't laugh. Just add these things and you will have a daily award.

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[Bill Murray Star Wars]

Cool

you're missing a mouth on Murray and lip sync. Take out the clock thing because your voice acting is good. the face was drawn pretty damn good. It was funny but the flash was a bit short. Also, add some violence like Murray killing someone. If you add those things, you'll have a definite quality flash

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